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Moonstones and Blue Roses by ~Blanzeflor:iconBlanzeflor:



Moonstones and blue roses
Strewn along the paths of the magnificent,
The energy of Yin whispers from above,
"This is how fast you fall in love..."

Wishing and will power and common sense,
Are powerless against the forces that The Fates apply,
It's futile to fight or reason with yourself,
Or hate yourself for the tears you cry.

Unexpected and random--no wall was up,
Infatuation feels like the love that melodies foment,
Smiles and symbols scattered about,
Seem like priceless treasures in the moment.

Moonstones and blue roses
Strewn along the path of Sisyphus,
Mystical tokens left by dreams from above,
Love burned on your mind and heart against your will,
And the haunting whisper..."This is how fast you fall in love..."
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Author's Comments

Funny how a simple phrase you see somehow strikes you and churns...

You never when or what hits you...but it happens just like that.

And sometimes....you don't want to or seek it...

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:iconforbsie:
interesting idea
its funny how things you spend so much time looking for often show up when you stop looking...

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The energy of Yin whispers from above,
"This is how fast you fall in love..."


and

Smiles and symbols scattered about,
Seem like priceless treasures in the moment.


Love 'em. Wonderful poem.

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"the body is the vehicle, bound by time.
the mind is the mechanics, bound by logic.
the soul is the part from the whole attempting to be an individual.
and the spirit is what remains of the bond shared before there was time."

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I wish I knew whom I should thank personally. Thank you very much!

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"Options are limited at present but optimism is not."--Blanzeflor
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Thank you, and thanks for taking the time to read it.

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"Options are limited at present but optimism is not."--Blanzeflor
:iconihaveastory:
You are welcome. It was my pleasure.

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"the body is the vehicle, bound by time.
the mind is the mechanics, bound by logic.
the soul is the part from the whole attempting to be an individual.
and the spirit is what remains of the bond shared before there was time."

I Have a Story
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'Moonstones and blue roses
Strewn along the path of Sisyphus,
Mystical tokens left by dreams from above'

such a good image!
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It was our pleasure.

In the News article, above the thumbnail of your deviation it says who featured you. Hope that helps. :)

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Thank you. It all seemed very real to me when I wrote it.

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"Options are limited at present but optimism is not."--Blanzeflor

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